[2.6].Scion-Cospri 's Malice+Soul Taker.NOT a guides, i need some help

sorry my english is poor, if something strange plz tell me.
This is my first post, I just have a idea, for Scion.
weapen are Cospri's Malice+Soul Taker, with any cold spell
first i want show my 2.6tree

Ascendancy 15/8 is normal, I only pick 1 point at Marauder ascendancy:"path of Marauder"..for more HP%.
I also pick"path of "+"path of Shadow", so my passtree has 4 area.
Marauder:1 points
Templar:3 points
Shadow:4 points
OKay next is weapen...core item:Cospri's Malice
I choose Soul Taker for 3 reason:

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Your Physical Damage can Chill

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Attacks per Second: (1.80 to 1.88)

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Insufficient Mana doesn't prevent your Melee Attacks

Why dual wielding bcs pass-tree give me "Twin Terrors" total 125% cirt.
And we use Essence of Horror, Gloves: Socketed Gems have +3.5% Critical Strike Chance.
With 4LCYCLONE + Increased Critical Strikes + Increased Area of Effect + Power Charge On Critical
crit chance 255%+120% Templar's ascendancy+ 130% for swords+125% for dual wielding+88% Increased Critical Strikes =718%.
basic crit=Cospri 5.5%+1.9% Increased+3.5%Essence of Horror+1%Shadow ascendancy=11.9%.
now we have 97 crit chance in cyclone.
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193hp%+VP, I think it's fine....:D?
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About dmg...
now we have 164% ELE dmg+107% spell dmg+20% aera dmg=291% for ice spell +40% more dmg from ELE overload.
Is it powerful? I'm not sure. But 291% dmg is over then other 2.6 Cospri'sMalicebuild I can find.
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Helm I use Devoto's Devotion, 16%Attack Speed and 20%Movement Speed.
bsc we dont need 6Lchest ..so... Kaom's Heart for500HP/Cospri's Will for 2Curse/Belly of the Beast for 40%HP
choose 1.
boots/ring/amulet/belt I choose rare item to take HP/ele res/movement speed...
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It's my first post, plz tell me where is the BUG or is it work?