Noob needing help with my first build.

My idea is a Poison/Bleed DW CoC build. With this build I have 100% chance to poison on hit, 60% chance to bleed, and as much crit/aspd as I could fit in. But I feel like I am lacking in the survivability department. I'm not positive on the main skill I want to go with just yet, but I do know that for the CoC skill, I want to try the new shattering steel skill. Pretty much want to have As many Dots going at once.



This is my first attempt at my own build, and would like some help/criticism.